Poetry and personal blog – Spilling my guts to strangers

Fruit falls from the trees;
your hair, a jungle caught in
original sin.

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NaPoWriMo Day 3. Using the NaPoWriMo prompt, I wrote this poem based on the song that was #1 on the charts the day I  was born. I had never heard this one before, so I had to look up the lyrics.

Check out this list of my poet friends who are also doing the poem-a-day challenge. Visit them and cheer them on! Contact me if you want to be added to the list.

© Sweepy Jean and Sweepy Jean Explores the (Webby) World, 2012.

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Comments on: "Untitled Haiku (Elvis Inspired)" (24)

  1. I love it..! What a great idea of making it into a haiku!

  2. Very nice. I love Elvis.

  3. Hello Sweepy.
    Love Elvis…but he still was not as handsome as me! LOL
    Nice Haiku. Thanks for sharing.

    Day 3: Cosmopolitan Flower

  4. Oh, I love this! Such imagery in so few words. Just beautiful!

  5. Janaki Nagaraj said:

    Nice Haiku.

  6. Mmmm, hmmm… You’re good at this poetry writing thang. Yes indeed. Your words captured the essence of this catchy Elvis tune perfectly. 🙂

    • Tameka,

      I have responded to your very nice comments my blog, and mentioned there that I’ve been trying to comment on your work on your typepad ….but I can see only sidebar content. Now on the archive page I can see post unformatted but if I click through to comment I return to another blank body page. This happens in two browsers. I’m trying to figure out the problem…Just want to let you know.

      Regards,
      Doug

    • Thanks, Tameka! Lots of animals and hair touching in that one! ;p

  7. Good Get Girl. A whole lot going on in these three lines.

    Regards,

    Doug

  8. leximagines@gmail.com said:

    I love “original sin.” So much packed into those wonderful words. :0)

    • Lol, that phrase is like poet’s gold!

    • Lexi dear, I just hunted you down, no I am no stalker. lol I enjoy reading the poems on your blog. Unfortunately, I cannot comment because of the captcha. Anyway, I’m just letting you know that I do read, share, but commenting is out of the question. Take care.

  9. Who whooooooooo.. I love Elvis and your talent…. As always…XOXOXOXO

  10. Jean, with this clever haiku, you’ve managed to catapult me back in time to when Elvis was singing this tune! Well done! 🙂

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