Poetry and personal blog – Spilling my guts to strangers

Piet Mondrian. Broadway Boogie-Woogie. 1942-43 Courtesy of Olga's Gallery

Piet Mondrian. Broadway Boogie-Woogie. 1942-43
Courtesy of Olga’s Gallery

dear heart

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Comments on: "On Mondrian 2 (dear heart)" (4)

  1. Clever. I had to go from an overall impression to a decision of whether to read it right to left, left to right up, down, etc. I think “jeer dart” is my favorite. I would classify (aren’t I stuffy?) this as a painting, tho, not a poem . . . But maybe if I heard you read/perform it?

    • Just last night I was talking to my cousin of poem fame about the connection between one art form and another. I’m glad this works visually for you. I like the “air” and “blocks.” The only other deliberate words there are “dear heart” and the rest are random combinations. I meant to replicate the sound but I wonder if the combos are strange enough to erase their meaning. A work in progress … Once I fix it I’d love to read it!

  2. This, Adriene, is a wonderful word salad. LOVE it.

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